please review my tutorial for Patchwork

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villager
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please review my tutorial for Patchwork

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would really appreciate your time to review, and rate at the very end.

If you are going to rate it less than a 4, please give me the feedback to fix it.

https://boardgamearena.com/tutorial?gam ... torial=643
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3ntn
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Re: please review my tutorial for Patchwork

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Hello! Nice work, I find it well done.
I can contribute a few minor nitpicks:

"you cannot afford by highlighting them in red" (or something similar if not those exact words)
Patches that cannot fit on your board are highlighted in red too. If you want, you can add it (maybe between brackets).

- There's often an ellipsis with only 2 dots, I'd recommend to either use … or add a third dot:
2 Buttons.. -> 2 Buttons...
Just kidding.. -> Just kidding...
deducted.. -> deducted...
position.. -> position...
offer.. -> offer...
cost.. -> cost...
times.. -> times...
moves.. -> moves...
unaffordable.. -> unaffordable...
spaces.. -> spaces...
placed.. -> placed...

- Space before colon:
labeled : -> labeled:

- ie should be written i.e.

- Spelling:
ahead of your opponents, -> ahead of your opponents',
or on your opponents, -> or on your opponents',
on top of the opponents. -> on top of the opponents'.
who's Time Token -> whose Time Token
top, of the opponents. -> top, of the opponents'.
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villager
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Re: please review my tutorial for Patchwork

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Thank you for your precious time and laser attention to punctuation 🙂
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