Hello u-topia, I have just checked your tutorial on YOKAI
https://boardgamearena.com/tutorial?gam ... torial=310
I found the tutoial very easy to understand, except for this sentence at the beginning: "The player‘s objective is to collect (all 4 cards of the same Yokai are adjacent to each other) each Yokai (Kitsune, Rokurokubi, Kappa, Oni) within a set number of turns."
I would suggest a wording like this:
"The 16 Yokai cards show the 4 Yokai (Kitsune = red, Rokurokubi = purple, Kappa = green, Oni = blue). Each Yokai is present 4 times.
The player's objective is to rearrange them within a certain number of turns until all 4 cards of the same Yokai are adjacent to each other."
The rules of best practice say that readers should only be asked to act when they actually need to do something. So you might want to make these adjustments:
„To prepare for the start, shuffle the Yokai cards and place them face down in the center of the play area in a 4 x 4 grid. 2 - „To prepare for the start, the Yokai cards are shuffled and placed face down in the center of the play area in a 4 x 4 grid.“
„Put the cards back where they belong.“ (delete)
„Move Yokai card with the blue border“ - „We move…“
„Reveal the hint card and end your turn again“ - „Then we reveal...“
But that's just a small thing. I think your tutorial is very well done all in all. Thank you!
