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Re: The way to Juliet - alpha
Posted: 29 October 2023, 17:35
by Mathieu 314
I explained the rules to my girlfriend and she had trouble understanding the guard card she fetched was the one top left and was confused about the "do you want to redraw" because she couldn't find where the guard card was at first. Maybe add a text under the card ? Or write "you fetched the guard rules XXX. Do you want to redraw it ?".
I̶ ̶w̶i̶l̶l̶ ̶c̶r̶e̶a̶t̶e̶ ̶a̶ ̶b̶u̶g̶ ̶r̶e̶p̶o̶r̶t̶ ̶s̶o̶o̶n̶
edit : done !
Re: The way to Juliet - alpha
Posted: 31 October 2023, 18:12
by Polymorphism
Mathieu 314 wrote: ↑29 October 2023, 17:00
There is an error in the rules :
Page 3 : "Place balconies, guards, and column cards according to the field setup (page 6)"
However, the setup is page 7 and not 6.
Thanks Mathieu 314 for report, I have checked the rules the thing is that the filed setup chapters started at the end of page 6, there is the text description of how to get result as shown on schema on page 7
Re: The way to Juliet - alpha
Posted: 31 October 2023, 18:26
by Polymorphism
Mathieu 314 wrote: ↑29 October 2023, 17:35
I explained the rules to my girlfriend and she had trouble understanding the guard card she fetched was the one top left and was confused about the "do you want to redraw" because she couldn't find where the guard card was at first. Maybe add a text under the card ? Or write "you fetched the guard rules XXX. Do you want to redraw it ?".
I̶ ̶w̶i̶l̶l̶ ̶c̶r̶e̶a̶t̶e̶ ̶a̶ ̶b̶u̶g̶ ̶r̶e̶p̶o̶r̶t̶ ̶s̶o̶o̶n̶
edit : done !
Thank you for advice, added warning and score icons to make this cards more intuitive, also will look to possibility change redraw text
Re: The way to Juliet - alpha
Posted: 01 November 2023, 09:01
by Polymorphism
Mathieu 314 wrote: ↑29 October 2023, 17:35
I explained the rules to my girlfriend and she had trouble understanding the guard card she fetched was the one top left and was confused about the "do you want to redraw" because she couldn't find where the guard card was at first. Maybe add a text under the card ? Or write "you fetched the guard rules XXX. Do you want to redraw it ?".
I̶ ̶w̶i̶l̶l̶ ̶c̶r̶e̶a̶t̶e̶ ̶a̶ ̶b̶u̶g̶ ̶r̶e̶p̶o̶r̶t̶ ̶s̶o̶o̶n̶
edit : done !
In bug report I was misunderstand about "text above" proposal.
This is great advice, Thank you!
Just released this change:
Re: The way to Juliet - alpha
Posted: 01 November 2023, 15:50
by Mathieu 314
No you weren't mistaken. They was two different suggestion of way to make it easier to understand
it's perfect with the change you just released / the picture you just posted !
Re: The way to Juliet - alpha
Posted: 01 November 2023, 15:52
by Mathieu 314
Should it be "may redraw" instead of "may to redraw" (not sure I am not a native speaker) ?
Also I would make a new sentence, i.e. "You need to avoid X guard. You may redraw this card once."
Re: The way to Juliet - alpha
Posted: 02 November 2023, 16:52
by Polymorphism
Mathieu 314 wrote: ↑01 November 2023, 15:52
Should it be "may redraw" instead of "may to redraw" (not sure I am not a native speaker) ?
Also I would make a new sentence, i.e. "You need to avoid X guard. You may redraw this card once."
Thank you Mathieu, you are completely right, I fixed this label.
Re: The way to Juliet - alpha
Posted: 04 November 2023, 09:42
by Polymorphism
The way to Juliet is now on
Beta Thank you all for participating in the test and review processes! Your input was incredibly beneficial. Thanks to you the game was improved a lot! I hope will see you all in my future games!