errors in validated quantum chinese translation 2
Posted: 07 September 2016, 14:19
I discovered errors in validated quantum chinese translation again.
The card Eager reads: Free deployment: The deploy action does not use up one of your actions.
And the chinese translation is 免費部署：你可以至多免費一次執行部署行動。
which is wrong, it falsely says that this ability can only be used once per turn.
I would translate it as 免費部署：你的部署行動不會花費行動。
The card Strategic reads: Combat support bonus: Any of your ships next to another one of your ships gets a -2 to every attack or defense combat rolls (an attacker is not considered as having entered the defender's square).
And the chinese translation is 戰鬥支援獎勵：當你有任1艘太空船與友艦相鄰時，可以在攻擊或防守時得到 -2 點戰鬥骰點數的效果。（然而攻擊方在攻擊成功能後就不能移入防守方的位置了）
which is partly wrong, the texts in the bracket falsely says that an attacker which enjoys this benefit cannot move into the position of the defender after destroying it.
I would translate it as 戰鬥支援獎勵：你的任何一艘與友艦相鄰的太空船，可以在攻擊或防守時得到 -2 戰鬥骰點數的效果（攻擊時攻擊者不算是進入了防守者的方格）。
Een, please fix them. I am using Chinese Traditional btw.
The card Eager reads: Free deployment: The deploy action does not use up one of your actions.
And the chinese translation is 免費部署：你可以至多免費一次執行部署行動。
which is wrong, it falsely says that this ability can only be used once per turn.
I would translate it as 免費部署：你的部署行動不會花費行動。
The card Strategic reads: Combat support bonus: Any of your ships next to another one of your ships gets a -2 to every attack or defense combat rolls (an attacker is not considered as having entered the defender's square).
And the chinese translation is 戰鬥支援獎勵：當你有任1艘太空船與友艦相鄰時，可以在攻擊或防守時得到 -2 點戰鬥骰點數的效果。（然而攻擊方在攻擊成功能後就不能移入防守方的位置了）
which is partly wrong, the texts in the bracket falsely says that an attacker which enjoys this benefit cannot move into the position of the defender after destroying it.
I would translate it as 戰鬥支援獎勵：你的任何一艘與友艦相鄰的太空船，可以在攻擊或防守時得到 -2 戰鬥骰點數的效果（攻擊時攻擊者不算是進入了防守者的方格）。
Een, please fix them. I am using Chinese Traditional btw.