New tutorial from leafsnack: https://boardgamearena.com/tutorial?gam ... torial=698
Congratulations, it's a very good tutorial. I love the ilustrations!
Some comments:
- When showing how resources are counted, explicitely precise that there are 3 blue animal resources because of the one on the flipped card on the left bottom corner.
- On the gold card close up, replace "its cost" by "its requirements"
- "Speaking of which, notice how each card has at least one closed corner": I think that's not accurate, there are cards with no closed corner.
- I never play the starting card flipped, as it's much better to benefit from the central resources. Therefore, I would not have used that option in the tutorial (but it's not a big deal to leave it like that!).
- There is an image on the "Two common objectives cards have been dealt" step but it's not related to common objectives cards.
- After playing the red card, we are missing a step to draw a card. We are required to play a flipped card but there are only 2 cards displayed! It's only when clicking the "flip cards" button that the blue card appears again.
- The places where the second and third blue cards should be played are not explicitely displayed (but it's required to play the cards there to continue).
- When explaining how objectives score, it's crucial to precise that each card can only be counted once to score each objective. For instance, a series of 4 blue cards following the pattern would only score once and not twice.
- "The game ends when a player reaches +20vp, at which point objectives will be scored". I suggest: "The game ends when a player reaches at least 20 points. After one final turn, objectives will be scored."
As a side note, I have translated your tutorial to French.
Congratulations, it's a very good tutorial. I love the ilustrations!
Some comments:
- When showing how resources are counted, explicitely precise that there are 3 blue animal resources because of the one on the flipped card on the left bottom corner.
- On the gold card close up, replace "its cost" by "its requirements"
- "Speaking of which, notice how each card has at least one closed corner": I think that's not accurate, there are cards with no closed corner.
- I never play the starting card flipped, as it's much better to benefit from the central resources. Therefore, I would not have used that option in the tutorial (but it's not a big deal to leave it like that!).
- There is an image on the "Two common objectives cards have been dealt" step but it's not related to common objectives cards.
- After playing the red card, we are missing a step to draw a card. We are required to play a flipped card but there are only 2 cards displayed! It's only when clicking the "flip cards" button that the blue card appears again.
- The places where the second and third blue cards should be played are not explicitely displayed (but it's required to play the cards there to continue).
- When explaining how objectives score, it's crucial to precise that each card can only be counted once to score each objective. For instance, a series of 4 blue cards following the pattern would only score once and not twice.
- "The game ends when a player reaches +20vp, at which point objectives will be scored". I suggest: "The game ends when a player reaches at least 20 points. After one final turn, objectives will be scored."
As a side note, I have translated your tutorial to French.