please review my tutorial for 7 Wonders Duel

[villager]

https://boardgamearena.com/tutorial?gam ... torial=635

feedback appreciated!

[villager]

folks.. it will just take 10 mins of your time to review and rate the tutorial. Please go till the very end to rate.

I can really use your expert opinions to make the tutorial better for this awesome game.

[frankenStain]

gonna make notes stepwise (chronologically as steps come up):
{in the part where you call it "city" where all buildings are built - mark it } - done
{wonders - extra turn and money are quite common, should be mentioned (especially extra turn since it's one of the most important things in vanilla 7wd)} - done
{[(got a step skipped so not sure about it) tokens need to be explained (maybe when drawing library)] - nvm, since it's also explained at an appropriate time} - done
{[intrinsic effect of yellow cards need to be explained +1 coin per trashing card per yellow built card] - nvm comes later..} - done
{I couldn't click quarry and couldn't proceed in tutorial ( at least I thought that, because I assumed I needed to click on the card and was done with it - didn't get instantly that I need also to click "construct building" because window hovered only over quarry and didn't move after I clicked it)} - done

{when you explain that you need 6 unique science symbols its helpful to know, that they are 7 in total - 1 token, 2 pairs in age 3 and 4 pairs in age 1 and 2 (4 uniques in each)} - partially done

{problem building caravansery - tutorial window was in the way of building option ( had to minimize)} - done


also it needs to be explained how the card pyramids are built (as in scroll down for all cards in an age + 3 of them are sorted out blindly when making the pyramids)


general note:
{back button would be awesome! (if you need to read a step again)} - not solvable, it seems (since a replay is used - and cant go back there -.- )

final thoughts:
its pretty good! - thx for your efforts!!

[villager]

gonna make notes stepwise (chronologically as steps come up):


general note:
back button would be awesome! (if you need to read a step again)

final thoughts:
its pretty good! - thx for your efforts!!

You are awesome frankenStain! PM'ing you to discuss some of the feedback.

FYI the tutorial framework in BGA uses Replay Logs.. they only move forward

[frankenStain]

hey, edited my post above - only thing missing, in my mind at least, are these 1-2 points:
"also it needs to be explained how the card pyramids are built (as in scroll down for all cards in an age + 3 of them are sorted out blindly when making the pyramids)"
at very least its helpful to know that there is an overview of all cards if you scroll down (and 3 in every age are missing + only 3 out of 7 guilds are in play)

[villager]

both points have now been added. Thx Frankenstain!