please review my tutorial for Patchwork

[villager]

would really appreciate your time to review, and rate at the very end.

If you are going to rate it less than a 4, please give me the feedback to fix it.

https://boardgamearena.com/tutorial?gam ... torial=643

[3ntn]

Hello! Nice work, I find it well done.
I can contribute a few minor nitpicks:

"you cannot afford by highlighting them in red" (or something similar if not those exact words)
Patches that cannot fit on your board are highlighted in red too. If you want, you can add it (maybe between brackets).

- There's often an ellipsis with only 2 dots, I'd recommend to either use … or add a third dot:
2 Buttons.. -> 2 Buttons...
Just kidding.. -> Just kidding...
deducted.. -> deducted...
position.. -> position...
offer.. -> offer...
cost.. -> cost...
times.. -> times...
moves.. -> moves...
unaffordable.. -> unaffordable...
spaces.. -> spaces...
placed.. -> placed...

- Space before colon:
labeled : -> labeled:

- ie should be written i.e.

- Spelling:
ahead of your opponents, -> ahead of your opponents',
or on your opponents, -> or on your opponents',
on top of the opponents. -> on top of the opponents'.
who's Time Token -> whose Time Token
top, of the opponents. -> top, of the opponents'.

[villager]

Thank you for your precious time and laser attention to punctuation

[A big rat]

Typo near the end of the tutorial: "who's Time Token" → "whose"

I really loved the tutorial: it explains everything step by step, not just the rules but also why you'd want to take an action or another. Thanks Villager!

[SionedCati]

Really useful!
I've learnt several things I didn't know - like the flip button! How did I miss that! So many times I've wanted to reach into my screen and grab the patch and snip a bit off with my scissors
Also why sometimes I get 3 goes in a row - mystery solved!
Thank you @Villager!